MWHAHAHA I'M GOING TO BORE YOU WITH MY TERRIBLE POETRY!!! Seriously though, I read this line in a book, and I started feeling all creative and shit. So I decided to write a poem/short story. I brb, cause I want it to stay under 250 words, so I'm gonna type it on Word then copy and paste.
Okay done. I'm not sure how bad it is, so you've got to tell me
The Girl Who Looked at Lightning
He saw the way she stared at the sky
Bright flashes lighting up her face
Showing the passion and longing imprinted there
He saw her pain
The desire
Wishing to be let free
He saw her standing on the hill
Not feeling the rain soaking him to the skin
Watching her close her eyes
He saw the wind beating at her dress
Whipping it around her legs
Plastered to her by the turrets of water
He saw the lighting flash across the sky
Felt the thunder shake the earth
The sting of rain on his body
He saw her raise her arms into the air
Somehow noticed the tears amidst the rain
Running down her face
He saw the lightening fork down
Striking her finger tips
Hearing the cry of pain and release
He saw the light flash through her
Watched her arch her back
Before she fell to the ground
He saw her broken body
Knowing that finally
She was whole again
Let me know what you think. Ttyl
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this is really good! even though i have problems with nonmeter poems its still really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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